hmm the first n second is one of my gals poems. well since she kinda failed in it she stopped riting them. so i want her to keep on riting poems no matter wut. i hope ur comments wud help her to rite poems again.The last one is by one of my good guy friend named Robbie. He has just started his love path so lolzz congratulate him ppl he didnt wanna put them up but i though its good.. wut y'all think?



I feel like singing to myself
I feel like gettin wet in rain
I feel like flying in the sky
I feel like listening to melodies
I feel 1000 butterflies in me
I feel like shining as a moon
I feel like blushing
I feel like the whole world is beautiful
I feel nervous inside me
I feel the uncertainity in me
I feel the feeling i have for you
Whenever i talk to you
When will you ever understand me?
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The moon burns me
The wind fires at me
My friends seems enemies to me
My family seems distant to me
The snow is dirt to me
The rain is hail to me
My dreams are nightmare for me
My hopes are stupider to me
Our friendship is over
Our relationship is over
On the day you said
"You are nuthin but just a friend"
Oh how i wish earth cud have taken me in
The happiness disappeared in me
The memories made a forever mark in my heart
That will not be forgetten by me
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It hurts
It gives aches
It makes me crazy
It drives me nuts
It diverts me all da time
It makes me think constantly
It makes me laugh to myself
It makes me get scared
It makes me to dream
It makes me to feel happy
oh well its the thought abt u gal
these are the symptomns of love
And it gives this sweet pain that is good to feel
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Sorry Praveena!!

Hmmm, nice one

Why r u apologising Saravana?

Ithellam engayo cinema parthu copy panathu pola iruku.. If I tell this c u gonna argue with me.. Thats y safety warrant mathri.. First Sorry!!!

hehehe, enna saravana

mun jaamin aa???

lolz

Funny Guy

nice one

lolzz karthik i aint gonna fite wit u.... well this is their stly karthik n this is their way of relating to love. so all i am tryin to do is help them to rite more poems. may b they will improve rite?? criticizing is a first step to help out a person to b more better. so my friends will b cool wit tat.. lolzzz ennai paarthu unakku bayama?? ithullam over karthik.. avik seriously cut n paste stop pannittu type sumthin dude n lolzz jen as usual enna nice one-a? c'mon give ur true comments my friends wont take it bad.. lolzzz

My True comment is

VERY VERY NICE PRAVEENA!!!

Not bad, nice

hahaha Lolz Guyzzzzzzzzz!!!!! Hey praveena nice poemz ya!!!! Well I like the word the " Moon Burnz Me" Lol Moon has taken up the sun'z job huh!!!! Newayz good one !!!! Nice readin it!!!!

they have felt n wrote...Even though some lines seem like film dialogues thats the feeling u get in love....And thats wat has been written...Nice ones pravee...

thnx guys i will let them all knw of ur comments. daaii nesh venaam lollu pannatha.... hey neeye orul love expert unakku ithulla theriyathu? lolzz thnx jen. honeycf n mek's. i will show ur comments to them....and mek's i have not been in love yet soo but i have been rite?? lolzz yea i dunno how to rite poem either

I m afraid of u Praveena.. whenever I offend u, u would come back very strong at me.. thats y.. anyway the poems are really gud though some of them are clones of movie songs.....

oh seriously? welll i swear to got i dunt take it as offending never.. ok lemme explain frm now on watever i say is my opinion n it is not intended to hurt any1's feelings. i believe every1 has rites to say their view n hear others view. other than that i dunt try to offend ppl. if i have offended u in the pasy Soo sorrry k?? u can b free to tell ur poinions to me.. jeezz u made me look like hitler. i aint tat bad da karthik

Hahaha Lolz Praveena!!! I am an love expert wa? I have no experience in love too!!! Newayz i think ur friend who wrote thiz must be seriously in love!!! Newayz writing poem is not important, its just a kinda imperessment and the way u pen down da feeling of love in written!!!! Itz sound sweet but the most important thing is how he or her move along wif da feeling of love!!!! The most important thing is to be sincere, understanding and loyalty!!!!! Well i am not telling not to write any poem or whatever, but what iam trying to say is if ur in love make sure u take those three thing above into consideration to make love true and meaning ful!!!!!!! Then oly the feeling of love can be felt !!! Do u guyz angree wif me!!!!! kayz Praveena i am waiting for ya long paragraph reply!!!!! ( Just Kiddin kayz)

nesh naan surrender da.... watever u say in love is rite pa. ok? lolz and i dunno how to lecture on love so may b wat u sayin is ritee. i never advice or do anythin to my friends regaring love cuz its an unknown territory for me and therrfore i dunt give them any advice. but only support them nesh anyways i shud ask my friends to ask u abt love issues lota them do have many probs

Lolz Praveena surrender wa!!! Hey praveena although u dunno much about love its sweet that u takin an effort to help ya friendz!!!!! As i alwayz say ur an angel!!!!! ( Putting Ice Huh!!!! ) Well i am actually not a love specialist ma, itz just that i had love experience b4 and i really learn alotz of thing from ma past love!!!! No matter what happenz in love just take it easy and move on wif our lifes!!!! Thatz ma policy!!!!!

nice ones.. a good try...... ,
thanks for sharing paraveena

whoaaa sweetmichee thnx for replyin.. hmm u r like a famous person in more sites n i am happy to c u replyin in my topic thnx

awww nesh nalla velai i thought u were gonna say pisasu but nah u said angel ok ok.. good and u cant say no matter wut happens in love wen u r in love da u cannot find it as nothin. lolz i have seen my friends life n tellin u. lolz nee love-la vizhunda appuram theriyum da che che saabam kudukalla okva??

Seringge Madam Praveena!!!!!! Negge sonna serri!!!! Unggel pechai nan thatte wa mudiyem!!!!( I hope u understand ma broken Tamil)

lollz nesh ennadaa sudden surrender..... namba mudiyallaaayeee..... neeye broken pieceee unn tamil mattum enna olungava irukkum chumma jokee no tension ok?

LOlz Praveena!!! Adesiyem Annaal Unmai!!!!!I am not a broken piece but a master piece!!! Ithe eppedi!!!! Newayz surrender pannerethe ellam politicz than ma!!!!! Ithe ellam valkaiyyil sagejemmaaaaa!!!!

ada pavee neee nallla improve agiduveee..dai nee pesammaa politician-a vanthuteenu vaii neee thaannn one-a nippe ( i meant forgery fraud 1) lolzz.. i shud put sum posting in this corner no one is posting anythinn here.. jen used to do this and she must b buzyy

LOlz!! actually i hate politics as well as politicianz!!!! Some of them really sux!!! Newayz i think jenny is bz maaaa!! Newayz hwt u mean by u gonna put some posting in thiz corner that no one is posting anything here?Nesh is kinda blur?

well except naushad and sweetmiche no one else is active here. only jen used to b active by posting sum articles n stuff.. lolzzz tats wat i meant.. u r always blur. its ok i understand nesh

What to do !!!! U alwayz make me blur!!!! Gosh I need a tequila!!!!

daii nee tequila adichuttu puttin the blame on me for ur blur condition.. paaarrudaa do u drink tequila? its like the hard core acid drink... maann u r bad

Heheheh cumma unmatheri adichi utten ler!!!!!!! Athe ellam kandukathey maaaaa!!!! Ellam un kitte learn pannethe than!!!!! Lolzzzzz....

ada pavee naan eppo unna maathiri reel vitten. nee thaaan no1 liar.. nee thaan politics naal pannuviye appadiyee plate-a thirupitte?? nice try but i never teach these skills to any1 bcuz it shud b born wit u n not learnt daa nesh i am born wit it

Yeah yeah!!!! U are born wif all da thirutte butti!!!!! Lolz!!! polichi poooooo

hey hey thiruttu pudhiyumm oru thanii skilll... ithu illatti eppadi friends kooda velila porathu??? amma kittenrnthu panam vangurathu?? vettukku late-a varathu? ithullamm thani skills n i have excelled it.. u r jealous daa

Heheheheh!!!!!Adde pavingella!!!! Nalla 10 kasse munji amma appa kitte kamichitte, ithe matheri thirutte veleai panneringella!!!!! Unmeyille un kitte than ma tution ke warenum!!!!!!

ithullam tuition vachu kathuka koodathu my friend. ithullam thaanaaa varanum... onnu rendu vaati fail aagi thittu vaangi athukku appuram skillfull-a poikku route podanum.. Hmmm ippoo poi sollurathukku munnaadi evlo thittu vangi iruken theriyuma.. enn moonchi paathu kaasa?? daiii unn moonchiyee kaandaiyile paarthittu vanthu enn moonchiya paathi sollu... wat to do my parents think being strict is gud but the y control my life u c?? lolz have u done any of the evil things? u do dunt u?

LOlz iNji thinne korengge munjei vechikitte nee eneyye kanadiyil paaka soleriya!!!! Lolz........ Newayz ma parentz wasn't being strict !! they were kewl and i also never took any advantages due to their kewlness!!!! Well Evil thing i have done meanz something like cut class and go for a movie,smoking ,drinking!! Thatz all i guess!!!!! Once ya parenzt are confident wif u, they wont controlled ya!! perhapz u parenatz know that u are Devil that have to be tamed and that y they are being strict wif i guess!!!! LOlz i wonder how they control a devil like ya!!!!

lolzzz ur paretns r cool n u have taken advantages of it.. innna smokin n drinkin isnt bad a??lolzzz so how do u get away wit it. sariii i am devill well my paretns try to control n tame me. but the more they control the more i try to cross the ruless.... my policy is break the house rules paa.. oh well thsi is our age do we get fun wen we r 25. we tnd to b more boring n dull( which is called "maturity" by the adults n keladz) lolzz so have fun cuz life is short n u live it once inna solure? am i not rite?

nice